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please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 3:02 pm
by Lao C Ryter
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Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 3:39 pm
by joel
Ektroma—taken from a wound—
aborted from the womb
by purpose or by miscarriage
of justice or of health:
if this is how I came to be
once born – not born again –
then still I hope I had a name
and someone knew my face.
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 3:40 pm
by joel
[and welcome. I'm sorry--I did a lousy job of remembering to welcome you, Lao C]
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:03 pm
by judih
my rage brandishes my name
i love this image
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:07 pm
by jim turner
Extraordinary, Lao, as is Joel's response. Rare poetry here. Stick around and inspire us. jim
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:23 pm
by .Lucy.
You've tapped into solid gold - welcome aboard Lao!
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:34 pm
by .Lucy.
If your Rage is yours,
then let me own
what is rightful-
My Happiness.
I will not absorb your Rage;
you've purchased it,
earned it,
fought for it.
It's yours for you to revel in
and enjoy.
Here lies the gift-wrapped Happiness,
and I pull at the strings of the bow gently.
Here I extend to you what I've unraveled;
do what you will with it,
but don't take away my Happiness.
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:51 pm
by Lao C Ryter
my rage seems
the firmament
that your happiness sinks
it's toe's into.
sinks it's toe's into
and wiggles them.
wiggling rightful happy toe's.
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 1st, 2010, 11:54 pm
by Lao C Ryter
Thanks for the welcome Lucy.
Your reply is excellent!
Re: please be gentle
Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 12:29 am
by .Lucy.
Room for wiggling one's toes,
wiggling away the Anger
and creating suds of Neutrality
to balance it all out.