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a Lao C poem.

Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 5:47 pm
by Lao C Ryter
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Re: a Lao C poem.

Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 8:35 pm
by mtmynd
truth without light may very well be no truth at all...

interesting write, lao

Re: a Lao C poem.

Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 11:04 pm
by happytrails
This is so disturbing. The blotting out of anyone is just a terrible crime.

Re: a Lao C poem.

Posted: December 3rd, 2010, 10:16 am
by Doreen Peri
Reads like a suicide note or a warning that you're going to kill your brother.

Well penned!

I agree with happtrails. Definitely disturbing.

But I'm sure it must be fictional.

From what I've read of your work so far, you are an adept craftsman. I'm enjoying your word works. :)