Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

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strange cocoon at the side of the road
wrapped in delight
propelled by curiousity
one can only wonder

Neatly wrapped tale. Knitted well.

I like this poem. The whole feel of the shared experience. I can relate to it. Although we had water and carrot sticks (and a couple of apples) Still I can relate.
I also liked Judih's response. Nicely done, Judih.

A three mile hump
Winding round creeks of coal
She examines his beauty
While aspiring to be
A fifth the poet he is
Hazed appreciations
Slightly drunken conversations
Reality swimming through our thoughts
Instead we will discuss tying knots

TY judih, provoking response.
TY dadio, inspiring response.
TY happytrails, wholesome and inspiring I found your response.
TY weepingwillow, I like the way you captured the spirit.