A healing Hole in the Heart, reopened

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A healing Hole in the Heart, reopened

Post by .Lucy. » December 13th, 2010, 10:19 pm

I found out the truth
today,
about you.

The hole that was healing,
the hole you caused,
reopened.

You lied,

to me

all along.


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Re: A healing Hole in the Heart, reopened

Post by saw » December 14th, 2010, 12:02 pm

lucy, the economy of this only enhances the sincere pain...any more could not improve your feelings
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Re: A healing Hole in the Heart, reopened

Post by happytrails » December 14th, 2010, 12:12 pm

I did read this one first, but I wanted to read both parts before commenting. Lies are sometimes more hurtful than a slap in the face. At least you see the slap coming, even if you don't have time to duck it.
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