LUCIA SAYS.
LUCIA SAYS.
Lucia says that
Mother’s dying, but
Father’s not said a
Word, he just comes and
Goes, treading soft on
The stairs, his eyes dark
Downcast, his head bowed
Like some chastised dog.
You sit on the stairs
And Bowyer leans his
Wet mouth on your lean
Shoulder, the dribble
Seeping into the
Cloth of your dress, his
Warm tongue licking your
Ear. Lucia says
Not to sit in the
Icy chill, you’ll get
Haemorrhoids, she moans,
Sitting there, you’ll be
Ill. But you sit there
Still. There are no sounds
From Mother’s room. Just
Father’s daily tread
Back and forth, like some
Pilgrim in flight from
The devil’s night. Some
Days Lucia takes
You for walks in the
Grounds, holding your small
Hand in hers with your
Dog Bowyer behind
Wagging his tail and
She talks of the trees
And the flowers and
Mother’s decline, her
Voice droning on in the
Wind’s wings, but you do
Not listen, or like
Her cold hand in yours
With its redness and
Sores and you recall
Her with Father in
The kitchen’s heat, his
Lips upon her cheek
Lifting her off her
Feet. Mother’s room is
Empty now; the wood
Coffin came and went
And few mourners, too.
Now Lucia sits
Where Mother sat, talks
And laughs as Mother
Used to do. Now there
Are four around the
Table once again:
Father, Lucia,
Dog Bowyer and you.
Mother’s dying, but
Father’s not said a
Word, he just comes and
Goes, treading soft on
The stairs, his eyes dark
Downcast, his head bowed
Like some chastised dog.
You sit on the stairs
And Bowyer leans his
Wet mouth on your lean
Shoulder, the dribble
Seeping into the
Cloth of your dress, his
Warm tongue licking your
Ear. Lucia says
Not to sit in the
Icy chill, you’ll get
Haemorrhoids, she moans,
Sitting there, you’ll be
Ill. But you sit there
Still. There are no sounds
From Mother’s room. Just
Father’s daily tread
Back and forth, like some
Pilgrim in flight from
The devil’s night. Some
Days Lucia takes
You for walks in the
Grounds, holding your small
Hand in hers with your
Dog Bowyer behind
Wagging his tail and
She talks of the trees
And the flowers and
Mother’s decline, her
Voice droning on in the
Wind’s wings, but you do
Not listen, or like
Her cold hand in yours
With its redness and
Sores and you recall
Her with Father in
The kitchen’s heat, his
Lips upon her cheek
Lifting her off her
Feet. Mother’s room is
Empty now; the wood
Coffin came and went
And few mourners, too.
Now Lucia sits
Where Mother sat, talks
And laughs as Mother
Used to do. Now there
Are four around the
Table once again:
Father, Lucia,
Dog Bowyer and you.
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Re: LUCIA SAYS.
The painting could produce umpteen poems as far as I am concerned but this is the one that came through.
Re: LUCIA SAYS.
Mother's breath has ceased to be.
Who'll drink Lucy's winter tea?
Father's mourning has begun.
Who'll eat Lucy's saffron bun?
Dogs can't talk, but she pretends;
where are Lucy's tamtar friends?
Father's lost and Mother's dead;
who will lighten Lucy's head?
Who'll drink Lucy's winter tea?
Father's mourning has begun.
Who'll eat Lucy's saffron bun?
Dogs can't talk, but she pretends;
where are Lucy's tamtar friends?
Father's lost and Mother's dead;
who will lighten Lucy's head?
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
Re: LUCIA SAYS.
a creative story, full of life's drama, the last two couplets are a good ending...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: LUCIA SAYS.
You are a good story-teller. I might not comment but I always read. jim
Re: LUCIA SAYS.
I know you do, Jim and thank you.
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