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Do it again, please

Posted: December 15th, 2010, 1:41 am
by weepingwillow
Dancing vehemence eyes

Slightest touch sparks
a sizzling fury, of prickly
bumps up my spine

An intense flame when
You say my name

Light-headed, sweltering
Grateful for your embrace
Cannot hold my place

Just before you kiss me

Re: Do it again, please

Posted: December 15th, 2010, 4:56 am
by dadio
A good doing and feeling poem. Like it very much. :D

Re: Do it again, please

Posted: December 15th, 2010, 2:29 pm
by Lao C Ryter
A graveside kiss
that missed your lips,
but landed all the same.

Re: Do it again, please

Posted: December 16th, 2010, 12:07 am
by happytrails
WW, I like your style. What an intense poem.
LCR, lovely tender response. We have a family member to whom we blow graveside kisses. Nice to think they are received.