LOVING MR FUDGEE.
LOVING MR FUDGEE.
Your father didn’t
Like Mr Fudgee
Getting into your
Bed snuggling up
Next to you putting
His nose into your
Ear and he would chase
Mr Fudgee out
Of your room and tell
You off in his deep
Baritone voice for
Allowing him in
Saying don’t let young
Mr Fudgee in
To your bed Alice
It won’t do and off
He'd go in temper
Huffing and puffing
But once he was out
Of earshot and off
Downstairs you would let
Mr Fudgee back
Into your room once
More and he’d get in
The bed and you’d hug
Him and kiss him and
Feel his warmth near you
And against you and
He'd look at you with
His big brown eyes and
You’d stare back at him
And know deep down that
You didn’t ever
Want to be without
Mr Fudgee and
Remembered clearly
How yesterday while
You sat in the big
Old chair in the hall
Mr Fudgee came
And sat on your lap
And began kissing
Your arm and face and
Eyelids and Father
Took him off by the
Scruff of his neck and
Saying remember
Your place in this house
Mr Fudgee don’t
Sit on Alice’s
Little lap and lick
And nuzzle your nose
Into her neck and
Off Mr Fudgee
Went looking back all
Sad and forlorn and
You gave him a small
Wave and blew him a
Kiss from your small palm
Which flew far beyond
Father’s reach and touched
Mr Fudgee’s nose
Invisibly as
None but you and your
Dog Mr Fudgee
Could know feel or see.
Like Mr Fudgee
Getting into your
Bed snuggling up
Next to you putting
His nose into your
Ear and he would chase
Mr Fudgee out
Of your room and tell
You off in his deep
Baritone voice for
Allowing him in
Saying don’t let young
Mr Fudgee in
To your bed Alice
It won’t do and off
He'd go in temper
Huffing and puffing
But once he was out
Of earshot and off
Downstairs you would let
Mr Fudgee back
Into your room once
More and he’d get in
The bed and you’d hug
Him and kiss him and
Feel his warmth near you
And against you and
He'd look at you with
His big brown eyes and
You’d stare back at him
And know deep down that
You didn’t ever
Want to be without
Mr Fudgee and
Remembered clearly
How yesterday while
You sat in the big
Old chair in the hall
Mr Fudgee came
And sat on your lap
And began kissing
Your arm and face and
Eyelids and Father
Took him off by the
Scruff of his neck and
Saying remember
Your place in this house
Mr Fudgee don’t
Sit on Alice’s
Little lap and lick
And nuzzle your nose
Into her neck and
Off Mr Fudgee
Went looking back all
Sad and forlorn and
You gave him a small
Wave and blew him a
Kiss from your small palm
Which flew far beyond
Father’s reach and touched
Mr Fudgee’s nose
Invisibly as
None but you and your
Dog Mr Fudgee
Could know feel or see.
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Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
What a wonderful way to capture the unconditional love between child and dog. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.
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Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
i have been reading your poems,
about children but not just maybe
poetry to me is always about childhoods
one way or the other, Rimbaud said "I am another"
the ones that exist on the art of great painters
I recall reading about a painting that used perspective
that a famous French philosopher used to
show some development in the mind of artists
there was a child in the painting along with other objects
about childhoods of man, so strange to contemplate now
and the ones that get stolen away, if i could find
that innocence it would have to invoke
a childhood of poets, and there would be
perhaps not so from the child's point of view
yet it would come through the words anyway, like
playing peek a boo.
to write poetry like this, Loving Mr Fudgee
the poet is playing with delicate things
and one off color line could kick the whole
thing into another realm, not easy to
keep that delicate balance, methinks.
oh then there are the sexy poems
oh and that reminds me of a story
about the word fudgee
A man is a god in ruins. When men are innocent, life shall be longer, and shall pass into the immortal, as gently as we awake from dreams.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
about children but not just maybe
poetry to me is always about childhoods
one way or the other, Rimbaud said "I am another"
the ones that exist on the art of great painters
I recall reading about a painting that used perspective
that a famous French philosopher used to
show some development in the mind of artists
there was a child in the painting along with other objects
about childhoods of man, so strange to contemplate now
and the ones that get stolen away, if i could find
that innocence it would have to invoke
a childhood of poets, and there would be
perhaps not so from the child's point of view
yet it would come through the words anyway, like
playing peek a boo.
to write poetry like this, Loving Mr Fudgee
the poet is playing with delicate things
and one off color line could kick the whole
thing into another realm, not easy to
keep that delicate balance, methinks.
oh then there are the sexy poems
oh and that reminds me of a story
about the word fudgee
A man is a god in ruins. When men are innocent, life shall be longer, and shall pass into the immortal, as gently as we awake from dreams.
Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
oh and that reminds me of a story
about the word fudgee
revolutionrabbit hilarious response.
dadio, Mr Fudgee gave me a Rockwellee feel. Thanks for sharing it.
(that's what she said)
about the word fudgee
revolutionrabbit hilarious response.
dadio, Mr Fudgee gave me a Rockwellee feel. Thanks for sharing it.
(that's what she said)
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
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night would be lost for my shiver.
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Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
Sweet. Loving and lovely. You must be in a Christmas mood. This is a lighthearted poem about a tender and touching topic. Thank you for brightening up my little corner of the world with these words.
Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
Thank you all for reading & comments.
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Re: LOVING MR FUDGEE.
This one touched a response chord. I have been reading your poetry posts and enjoying -- including Mr. Fudgee. I like cats more than dogs 'cause dogs insist on Frenchkissing.
The Duke of Wellington
His pedigree said "Duke"
but that was not sufficiently royal for me.
From the beginning his wee poodle self
became that special Duke,
you know, the Waterloo guy.
So everyone called him "Willy"
the "W-E" compbination
being beyond the Spanish language.
Oh, will -- uh, I mean, Oh, well.
He slept with me and Mistinget the cat
and with their furry selves I was toasty warm in winter
and warmer (ever so much warmer)
in summer.
I could not, however, forgive him
for catching me off guard
with a doggy french kiss
just when I had my mouth open speaking.
Alice, being young and innocent,
could ignore and adore doggy kisses.
I prefer a cat kneading my neck relentlessly --
but I still remember the Duke.
On occasion.
Sue L.
The Duke of Wellington
His pedigree said "Duke"
but that was not sufficiently royal for me.
From the beginning his wee poodle self
became that special Duke,
you know, the Waterloo guy.
So everyone called him "Willy"
the "W-E" compbination
being beyond the Spanish language.
Oh, will -- uh, I mean, Oh, well.
He slept with me and Mistinget the cat
and with their furry selves I was toasty warm in winter
and warmer (ever so much warmer)
in summer.
I could not, however, forgive him
for catching me off guard
with a doggy french kiss
just when I had my mouth open speaking.
Alice, being young and innocent,
could ignore and adore doggy kisses.
I prefer a cat kneading my neck relentlessly --
but I still remember the Duke.
On occasion.
Sue L.
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