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human confession

Posted: December 17th, 2010, 7:31 pm
by saw
I won't lie to you
there was lust and larceny
in my heart that day,
and they were, officially
split up for many months now
but he was a friend of mine

she was merciless
what did she think I'd do
when she got me high
and laid that tennessee
on my lips, her flowered
hippie dress all hiked up

her estranged man at sea
miles from the shores of her needs
her ass on the countertop
her breath hotter
than a key west afternoon, and me
with plenty of time to kill

Re: human confession

Posted: December 17th, 2010, 8:04 pm
by .Lucy.
I'd like a peek of a few more confessions like these...

Re: human confession

Posted: December 18th, 2010, 4:03 am
by mnaz
lust, or just the moment and circumstance..

Re: human confession

Posted: December 18th, 2010, 4:45 am
by judih
moment + circumstance = throbbing secret until confession

Re: human confession

Posted: December 18th, 2010, 7:19 am
by dadio
Neat poem; liked much. 8)

Re: human confession

Posted: December 18th, 2010, 5:24 pm
by jim turner
How could anyone yield not to such temptation? Do it again, too, if I could. jim

Re: human confession

Posted: December 19th, 2010, 2:20 am
by neologistic
caught up in moments and circumstances, being estranged to myself. thanks for the title and poem

Re: human confession

Posted: December 19th, 2010, 12:12 pm
by hester_prynne
Not only is this fantastic, it's burnin hot.
Love it Saw, as always,
your fan
H 8)

Re: human confession

Posted: December 19th, 2010, 1:42 pm
by WIREMAN
you sailors know how to live......scorcher poem indeed....

Re: human confession

Posted: December 20th, 2010, 7:37 am
by saw
thanx for all the great comments friends.....it's cool to live in such an
appreciative neighborhood......