My Time

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WIREMAN
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My Time

Post by WIREMAN » December 19th, 2010, 1:34 pm

times do change
destined for the rearrange
the pushing thru
the do waka do waka dew
laying on the leaf
in the morning
disappearing with the rising sun
dressed up and waiting
at the gate
gabriel on the other side
blowing that lonesome horn
i been reborn
had that 2nd chance
that's why i wired
love to dance
and sing
play that harmonica
joy life brings
till i hear the call
i'm gonna have a ball
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: My Time

Post by hester_prynne » December 19th, 2010, 1:56 pm

Indeed a shared wave length, complimentary.
A ditty for me to hum and gather with.
Love it Wireman..
H 8)
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Re: My Time

Post by joel » December 22nd, 2010, 9:22 am

Especially with your two intro lines...how can it not be read and reread and maybe even out of order, rearranged...? Great read!
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Re: My Time

Post by saw » December 22nd, 2010, 9:34 am

musical as always ( it's in your blood )....and also uplifting, which can't hurt...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: My Time

Post by dadio » December 22nd, 2010, 2:48 pm

Good inspired work, Wireman.

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Re: My Time

Post by WIREMAN » December 22nd, 2010, 6:56 pm

thanks for reading and responding my friends....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: My Time

Post by constantine » December 22nd, 2010, 7:35 pm

you said it, brother

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Re: My Time

Post by mnaz » December 22nd, 2010, 7:59 pm

wireman throwin' down! do waka do! dig.

hey mark and dino... is poetry in baltimore still up and running? i can't find it lately.

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Re: My Time

Post by constantine » December 22nd, 2010, 8:03 pm

should be straightened out soon from what i hear

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Re: My Time

Post by WIREMAN » December 24th, 2010, 9:50 am

poe town is the bomb!!!!!!!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: My Time

Post by constantine » December 24th, 2010, 9:57 am

you are the bomb! merry christmas, mark.

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