S petal cular Snow

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jim turner
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S petal cular Snow

Post by jim turner » December 20th, 2010, 6:35 pm

Capricious winds paint
from clouds of cherry blossoms
one last dream of snow.

Jim 10/28/08
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dadio
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Re: S petal cular Snow

Post by dadio » December 21st, 2010, 7:17 am

Well captured, Jim.
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joel
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Re: S petal cular Snow

Post by joel » December 21st, 2010, 5:02 pm

That's beautiful, delicate and exactly what I've known worldlessly form the two old cherry trees in my family's front yard...perfect, perfect, perfect!
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