She’s practical when she prepares for sex

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She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by joel » December 22nd, 2010, 4:46 pm

She’s practical when she prepares for sex
and not theatrical, but sultry in
the everyday removal of her clothes.
Direct and purposeful and confident
and unashamed by her defenselessness,
she offers honor – naked honor – in
the comfort of her knowing what comes next—
and when she lays her down, when love inspects
the close particularities of skin
relaxed before its senses, then the blessing
she exudes is in the complement
of how she’ll – with her body – there compose
her giving and her thank-you with a grin
that knows it touches love’s credendi lex.
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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by Sue Littleton » December 23rd, 2010, 8:37 am

Now there is a gentle and touching tribute to a woman's sexuality, Joel. I like it. Sue♥

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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by Lightning Rod » December 23rd, 2010, 9:20 am

wonderful poem, joel

where did you get that diabolical rhyme scheme?
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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by dadio » December 23rd, 2010, 9:57 am

No doubt about, Joel you can write excellent poems. This is sexual but classical.

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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by Hollweg » December 27th, 2010, 10:53 pm

This works very nicely for me, Joel, until the last two lines.

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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by Doreen Peri » December 31st, 2010, 7:37 pm

Gorgeous poem!

(Got a little tripped up on the last two words "credendi lex" .... gotta look that up).

Happy New Year, Joel! It's been great to see you back here posting your fine writing this past year!

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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by happytrails » January 4th, 2011, 1:07 am

They've said it all. I will reiterate. This is a fine and loving tribute to a woman. Sexy, but tender.

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Re: She’s practical when she prepares for sex

Post by weepingwillow » January 4th, 2011, 10:24 am

Hands down another poetic perfection written here.

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