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Posted: December 24th, 2010, 10:50 pm
by Hollweg
-|-s
Delirious days and dreams,
random encounters
become obvious
fulfilment of destiny.

Creation itself
culminated in this
orgasm.

Subtle though these turnings
seem, certainty
seeps like semen
into tissues
that unite our nights.

Re: -|-s

Posted: January 27th, 2011, 4:28 pm
by dadio
Neat poem.

Creation itself
culminated in this
orgasm. 8)

Re: -|-s

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 1:12 am
by Doreen Peri
Concise writing, metaphoric images... another really nice piece.

Re: -|-s

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 8:34 am
by Sue Littleton
If writing a poem that pleases the poet is an orgasm, words must be semen, and the ultimate result combines with the egg for BAM, another poem! Creatiion into Creative equals orgastic intellectual stimulation.

Does that make any sense? Probably not, but it's too early in the morning to think sensibly and the idea expressed DID encourage this drivel!

Sue♥♥♥