HAIKU 105

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Sue Littleton
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HAIKU 105

Post by Sue Littleton » December 27th, 2010, 11:15 am

garrulous grackles
roost at dusk on favorite tree
bicker gossip sleep

En las tinieblas los quiscales parlanchines
descansan sobre las ramas de su árbol favorito,
discuten, chismorrean y, al fin, duermen.
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Re: HAIKU 105

Post by saw » December 27th, 2010, 3:23 pm

a clear picture, and perhaps along with the image a deeper peek at relationships in general.....the beauty of haiku.........smile
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: HAIKU 105

Post by Sue Littleton » December 27th, 2010, 8:07 pm

Thank you, saw! It is SO nice to have my haiku understood ... Sue♥♥
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