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Haiku 106.
Posted: December 27th, 2010, 8:09 pm
by Sue Littleton
106.
last night the moon bloomed
branches capture small stray moons
magnolia exalts
Anoche floreció la luna
y las pequeñas lunas extraviadas se cayeron sobre las ramas.
La magnolia se exalta.
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 28th, 2010, 7:09 am
by saw
aah, magnolia in the moonlight...this took me back to my years in the Florida Keys and those walks home from the bar and the Night Blooming Jasmine...
there is romance in those satellite moons..............................peace, steve
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 28th, 2010, 9:04 am
by neologistic
night magnolias
exalt for the chance to be
Sue Littleton -ku
I'm sure the Moon and moons are honored for your observations, very enjoyable haiku
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 28th, 2010, 12:06 pm
by Sue Littleton
Thank you, Steve and Neo -- to enjoy the images reading a haiku brings to your mind is their reason for existing as a literary form.
Cariños,
Sue♥♥♥
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 28th, 2010, 12:40 pm
by dadio
Neatly captured, Sue.
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 28th, 2010, 6:39 pm
by jim turner
More than one way to see this. If the observer moves the moon will stray through branches. If the observer remains still, those big magnolias can appear to be small moons. Witchery. jim
Re: Haiku 106.
Posted: December 29th, 2010, 1:28 am
by Sue Littleton
Thank you kindly, Terry and Jim. Hugs, Sue♥