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creativesoul
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poppy

Post by creativesoul » December 31st, 2010, 5:44 am

dream on my poppy
sucess and fame
corrupted u lame
numb to cryin
i was dyin
one last c_ance to dance

on your feet
as a little kid
i fell apart
a woman for art
torn sculpted
aborted

my sons suffered
no family around
at last
we can talk of past scars
my sons i loved
more today
before soul
was only prayer
layer after layer
uncover-discover---
now
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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constantine
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Re: poppy

Post by constantine » December 31st, 2010, 11:22 am

i feel like i know exactly where you are coming from.

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dadio
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Re: poppy

Post by dadio » December 31st, 2010, 3:27 pm

Has that William Carlos Williams feel. Well expressed. Happy 2011.

Steve Plonk
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Re: poppy

Post by Steve Plonk » December 31st, 2010, 4:26 pm

Love is the best drug there is says the seer.

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