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joy

Posted: January 1st, 2011, 7:45 pm
by creativesoul
a new life
from my sons
love prevails
my youn_ men
came to me
soulful eyes
true stories
miles of ties
untold worry
sweet tears of love
tension
belief today
love tales

surrender
sweet swellin waves
time takes time
lies dead
peace is ours now

Re: joy

Posted: January 1st, 2011, 11:04 pm
by judih
"time takes time"

achingly true, creativesoul

Re: joy

Posted: January 2nd, 2011, 5:36 am
by dadio
Impressive poem. Good telling.

Re: joy

Posted: January 2nd, 2011, 10:48 am
by saw
the journeys of life take time, and that time defines us.....time has more of an impact on us than we do on it......good poem

Re: joy

Posted: January 2nd, 2011, 1:41 pm
by Steve Plonk
Creativesoul, Joy is an acquired emotion... Sometimes, there is a joy in simple things which becomes extraordinary when looking through a differing perspective...