ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

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ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Post by dadio » January 4th, 2011, 11:25 am

Mother said someone
Would break her heart

And Wally can still hear
Her mother’s words saying

Softly someone is going to
Break your fragile heart Wally

Because men always do it’s
What they’re good at oh yes

They’ll give you all the lovey
Dovey words they’ll bring the

Smelly posies and the big box
Of chocolates and the large

Elaborate cards but they’ll still
Break your heart Wally they’ll

Break it between their clumsy
Fingers the same fingers that

Pushed back your fringe that
Massaged your breasts but that

Was back then her mother’s words
Pushed back into a dark room

Of her mind but Mother was right
About men and their breaking of

Hearts and their clumsy fingers and
What Archpin did with his fingers and

How he broke her heart still lingers.
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Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Post by judih » January 4th, 2011, 1:37 pm

exquisite work, dadio

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Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Post by dadio » January 4th, 2011, 3:54 pm

Thank you for reading, Judih.

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Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Post by edsiejka » January 4th, 2011, 5:34 pm

Dadio-

Excellent piece of work

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Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Post by dadio » January 5th, 2011, 3:48 am

Thank you very much for reading & comments, Edsiejka. :)

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