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ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Posted: January 4th, 2011, 11:25 am
by dadio
Mother said someone
Would break her heart

And Wally can still hear
Her mother’s words saying

Softly someone is going to
Break your fragile heart Wally

Because men always do it’s
What they’re good at oh yes

They’ll give you all the lovey
Dovey words they’ll bring the

Smelly posies and the big box
Of chocolates and the large

Elaborate cards but they’ll still
Break your heart Wally they’ll

Break it between their clumsy
Fingers the same fingers that

Pushed back your fringe that
Massaged your breasts but that

Was back then her mother’s words
Pushed back into a dark room

Of her mind but Mother was right
About men and their breaking of

Hearts and their clumsy fingers and
What Archpin did with his fingers and

How he broke her heart still lingers.

Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Posted: January 4th, 2011, 1:37 pm
by judih
exquisite work, dadio

Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Posted: January 4th, 2011, 3:54 pm
by dadio
Thank you for reading, Judih.

Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Posted: January 4th, 2011, 5:34 pm
by edsiejka
Dadio-

Excellent piece of work

Re: ARCHPIN'S FINGERS.

Posted: January 5th, 2011, 3:48 am
by dadio
Thank you very much for reading & comments, Edsiejka. :)