let your honesty shine

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sonofthesun
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let your honesty shine

Post by sonofthesun » January 9th, 2011, 3:20 am

i sit here
alone
underground
listening
hoping that love
will just happen
why work
for what should just be
its christmas everyday
and the war never started
i am filled with this understanding
but no one will take my hand
and just hug me
as if i were their brother
why?
it is possible
i was adopted
i know none from birth
i am only what people have gifted me
my mother is life and she is good
yet sometimes harsh
enjoy the moments
as they are not yours
as nothing can be kept
forgive me my awkwardness
as my heart sings true
There is no empty space

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SadLuckDame
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Re: let your honesty shine

Post by SadLuckDame » January 9th, 2011, 3:25 am

This one was beautiful.
I know I don't answer you, but I do read them and digest.
I'm better at eating than conversations. I don't know a great way to express myself. I enjoy though, and I'm glad you share. Keep sharing.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: let your honesty shine

Post by sonofthesun » January 9th, 2011, 3:36 am

smiles. no worries. thank you. i dont answer most times when people post to me but i do read them and appreciate. as also i am sporadic in my usage of this place. but i am going to start trying to respond more than i have. i feel like conncecting moreso than i have in the past. im in a world building mode or some such...hasta luego. Marcus
There is no empty space

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