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Freebird

Posted: January 9th, 2011, 9:39 am
by saw
Get me clear mama
the whipping lizard tail
the backlash of civilization
please show me
techniques of ecstasy
how to be irrational
dance without conscience

embrace the savage movement
dive headlong into wanderlust

introduce me to my partner
I'm happy to trade my eyes
for the warm rhythm
or my mind for the trance
give me the rock, the roll
the tap dancing skeletons
the gratefully dead woes

give me a little bucolic utopia
some benign liberty, a touch
of silly nonconformity, a pinch
of miraculous tradition
the Dionysian festival of light
I'll whip out my zippo
play Freebird

Re: Freebird

Posted: January 9th, 2011, 11:36 am
by dadio
Impressive work. Enjoyed. 8)

Re: Freebird

Posted: January 9th, 2011, 3:10 pm
by Hollweg
Electronic wind
tingles crystal spine chimes my
heart beats out some bass.

Re: Freebird

Posted: January 9th, 2011, 9:22 pm
by WIREMAN
freebird inmygadadavida....cool poem saw.......

Re: Freebird

Posted: January 10th, 2011, 3:40 am
by mnaz
dude! rock on! more from the hendrix/sly/marley school myself, but... rock on!