what it is

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saw
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what it is

Post by saw » January 13th, 2011, 10:37 am

here
take this from me
it's for wasted time
forsaken breath

add it to the pile
pointless wrappings
sitting unopened by the door
no need to reveal them

they are skull splitting cymbals
they're 911 assistance
somehow late at night
when I end up

in some unknown alley
of perpetual thought
I see them at this very moment
helpless tokens

what might have been
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: what it is

Post by dadio » January 14th, 2011, 5:00 am

Fine words and theme.

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constantine
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Re: what it is

Post by constantine » January 14th, 2011, 9:52 am

smoothly done, brother saw.

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Re: what it is

Post by saw » January 14th, 2011, 9:58 am

taddy daddies.......dadio and daddy d.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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