not enough persimmon seeds

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sonofthesun
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not enough persimmon seeds

Post by sonofthesun » January 15th, 2011, 1:25 am

ever westward before the sun
with no aim but onwards
will the darkness overcome him?
or shall his mind contain dominion
There is no empty space

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mnaz
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Re: not enough persimmon seeds

Post by mnaz » January 15th, 2011, 1:42 am

his mind shall contain dominion
at least for now..

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Re: not enough persimmon seeds

Post by dadio » January 15th, 2011, 2:28 pm

Good poem; enjoyed.

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