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20/20
Posted: January 15th, 2011, 6:24 pm
by no1special
confusion
illusions
accusations
interpretation
stop challenging my imagination
choking-out my inspiration
squashing my ability
I know what I saw
it was real
fell asleep with my contacts in
that was all
Re: 20/20
Posted: January 15th, 2011, 6:49 pm
by neologistic
this is beautifully written, thanks for sharing it. hope all is well soon
Re: 20/20
Posted: January 15th, 2011, 10:43 pm
by weepingwillow
Almost as if you were speaking to me........
Confusion of miss-illusion
False accusations from
Assumed interpretations
Afraid to lose, my muse
Wasn't enough to you
Excuses,
It was in your imagination
I never felt love
Like this before.........either
Re: 20/20
Posted: January 16th, 2011, 7:11 am
by Doreen Peri
I fall asleep with my contacts on quite often. It stinks. Well it's less often than it used to be. But still. I could identify with this piece.
Sometimes it's hard to see when you can't see especially.
(that's a poem, that last line. It rhymes and everything).
Again, welcome to the studio. Hope you enjoy it.
This comment of mine is cliche but... "hindsight is 20/20".
