Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

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Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by no1special » January 15th, 2011, 8:41 pm

I asked
if you wanted to whip my ass
with a piece of licorice
fuck me if you wish

Whatever I said to provoke
I threw the remote
storming off
you called me a whore

Its true
I always want more
I’m insatiable
sexually
I’m never satisfied

Yet I lie in bed and wait
I would rather masturbate
than another relationship
waste my time to create

You will be fine
just anyone
you can find
to fill your time

You said it yourself
you’re lonely
she’s broken

I don’t care
if you live to resent me
at least
my heart Isn’t empty

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Re: Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by stilltrucking » January 16th, 2011, 7:51 am

Different strokes I guess
I liked the poem
just goofin with it

Warning the following post is rated PG-70

Freud's breakfast
two over easy
passive sex is a drag

Well it came to me as you came,
You don't even know my name.
You'd just as soon be fucking a doornob,
You asshole you.

You'll fuck anything that moves,
And I'll tell you what that proves:
You just want meat, you don't want me,
You asshole you.

Well you wish that I was stronger,
and could last a little longer.
I get so mad that I could spit.
I don't need that kind of shit.

Well you toyed with my affection,
And you laughed at my errection,
And its lack of circumsection,
You asshole you.

YOU ASSHOLE YOU (by Doug Haywood)

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Re: Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by no1special » January 16th, 2011, 10:04 am

Thank you for taking the time to read this...I know its crude but Im still thinking the exact thing as when I wrote it...the sting of actually being whipped with a red vine and the color of the mark left behind. The thought left a mark on my imagination, thats for sure! Again, thanks fior taking the time...excited to read more of everyone's work as I become familiar with the site!

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Re: Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by stilltrucking » January 16th, 2011, 10:15 am

You can count on me to miss the metaphor
sorry, I liked the poem a lot. I don't know nothing about poetry, I have no music in me, some kind of weird autism shit I think. But poetry is a trip for me, it is too wonderful for me to say. I probably should not even reply to posts to this board. I belong here like a "pearl onion on a banana split"

as long as we are speaking metaphorically I wish I was a poet too

I could maybe make this a poem

"do you want anything special" she asked
I was never a genorous love so no wonder I am practically a virgin but
I was dertimined to hear her out
So I said: "No I got no script in my head lets just act naturally" but trying to be genorous I asked: "Is there anything special you want?"
And she said: "scuba suits"
Took me a long time to figure out she was speaking metaphorically, even sarcastically.

don't mind me
I just dug the poem wanted to goof with it

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Re: Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by SadLuckDame » January 16th, 2011, 10:48 am

If you're my ex husband with an axe to grind, then please go.
Although, if you're one of Jack's puppets, please stay :P
And if you're not either...or, then very nice to meet you.

sweetly,
the dame

P.S. I couldn't stop her.
`Do you know, I was so angry, Kitty,' Alice went on...`when I saw all the mischief you had been doing, I was very nearly opening the window, and putting you out into the snow! And you'd have deserved it, you
little mischievous darling!
~Lewis Carroll

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Re: Licorice whip sounded interesting to me (adult content)

Post by Doreen Peri » January 16th, 2011, 2:52 pm

Awww.. sounds like someone broke your heart. Sorry to hear that. I suggest moving on. Leave the past in the past.

Also, just wondering... have you been here before under another name? And if so, what was your screen name?

If you haven't been here before under another name, just curious how you heard about Studio8. Did someone refer you here?

Market research.

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