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hollow daze

Posted: January 17th, 2011, 12:12 pm
by saw
one by one
the teardrops fell
concentric circles rippled out
like salty confession

I treat dogs well
I'm friendly to passersby
even though their blueteeth
frighten me

but I feel it slipping away
like the reliable tide
that has no intentions
of coming back

the erosion of love
that killed life
I know it all too well
the zombie mutants

will have their way with me

Re: hollow daze

Posted: March 4th, 2011, 2:53 pm
by joel
saw wrote:I'm friendly to passersby
even though their blueteeth
frighten me

but I feel it slipping away
:) Yes. This is awesome. But hold on, friend...we can't let go yet.

Re: hollow daze

Posted: March 4th, 2011, 6:05 pm
by constantine
mutant blue-toothed zombies are the worst. durable, they keep on coming. you need multiple head-shots to do the trick. i'm with you to the bitter end, brother saw.

Re: hollow daze

Posted: March 4th, 2011, 6:46 pm
by saw
thanx joel for recovering this from the abyss....and for the kind comments on top of it

dino, yes the bitter end....that's when you add too much Angonstura to your Manhattan, right ?.........

Re: hollow daze

Posted: March 6th, 2011, 2:51 am
by ButterflyKiss
This is one of the first things I ever read on S8! I love it! Blueteeth totally creep me out! I love this poem!

Re: hollow daze

Posted: March 6th, 2011, 4:00 pm
by saw
thanx so much butterfly k.......you are very kind......