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so random

Posted: January 17th, 2011, 1:24 pm
by creativesoul
funny how the people
i love
seem to come up on the ocean
like flower petals in the wind
sweet color, sounds of breaking waves
i know what it is like to come out from a daze

i remember you in sweetness
like a thousand prayers
your eyes gave me such depth
the smell of the sea
always on your skin
happy as a clam
next of kin
i wanted more of you
like a greedy child
now it would seem i was so blessed to have you at all

Re: so random

Posted: January 17th, 2011, 3:27 pm
by dadio
Excellently put.

i remember you in sweetness
like a thousand prayers.

(Very good lines)

Re: so random

Posted: January 17th, 2011, 11:13 pm
by judih
utterly beautiful, creativesoul

Re: so random

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 3:15 am
by creativesoul
thank you-it feels good to be back