Fishing for a compliment in your pool of drool

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no1special

Fishing for a compliment in your pool of drool

Post by no1special » January 17th, 2011, 9:05 pm

Fishing for a compliment in your pool of drool
I’m beautiful
you’re equally dutiful
in school
why didn’t anyone
fall for me

probably because
I was fat
not much too look at

I lacked confidence
only for my beauty
if that makes sense

college
is not where I obtained
the knowledge of my beauty

I think I blossomed
now I’m awesome

it was you that taught me
of the beauty that is me
you love me
just as I am

still
why do I crave the attention
I get for my appearance
especially from
the crooks
that steal a second look

should I put my appearance
on clearance

still fishing for a compliment
in your pool of drool
Last edited by no1special on January 18th, 2011, 3:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Fishing for a compliment in your pool of drool

Post by creativesoul » January 18th, 2011, 3:31 am

:oops:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Fishing for a compliment in your pool of drool

Post by dadio » January 18th, 2011, 7:54 am

Good good work.

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