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Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 1:37 am
by hester_prynne
I carried load after load
of my possessions
to a new space.
As if an alien hand
had ahold of my shoulder,
pulled me amiably along,
through it all.

Saw a few flashbacks,
of moves in the past,
more people, pizzas, beer.
This time just me.
No one else to consider.
Only the moments,
little incredulous bumps of joy.

All those shopping bags
I bought because I forgot,
came in handy.
Held my trinkets well,
while I the robust muse,
hoisted all my favorite things,
towards sanctuary.

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 10:07 am
by saw
love those, "little incredulous bumps of joy"......that make up a poem.....
hope the new digs create ever more bumps.......

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 7:52 pm
by stilltrucking
Your poem touched me, moved me
my eyes watering

beautiful poem Theda.
sanctuary unto you

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 3:18 am
by creativesoul
i like the poem
moving can be a bit complicated
is
easier when you are younger
but today
i have lightened my load-take it easy- excellant poem

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 10:42 pm
by Hollweg
Wholly, But, Uniquely, Solely, Hardly, Merely, Particularly, Alone, Purely, Simply, Totally, Nothing but, Utterly, At most, Entirely, Just, Plainly

the

instants, bits, twinklings, cracks, dates, flashes, points in time, hours, junctures, occasions, shakes, winks, ticks, breaths.

Small skeptical jolts of bliss.

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 11:18 pm
by hester_prynne
XO
H 8)

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 23rd, 2011, 12:26 pm
by WIREMAN
essence of the move.........

Re: Towards sanctuary

Posted: January 23rd, 2011, 1:53 pm
by creativesoul
after awhile you get tired of moving shit around in circles and you give it all away-