In And Out Your True Love Comes.

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In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by dadio » January 19th, 2011, 3:15 pm

In and out your true love comes,
Bone idle with his words and gestures,
Floats over you with reluctant sighs,

His eyes glazed as foggy skies,
His lips wet as rainy days but closed,
Tight shut and wordless as the dead.

Out and in your lover goes,
The night blows its wind and cold,
Only the emptiness caresses you now.
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Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by dadio » January 19th, 2011, 3:29 pm

Old poem revived.

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Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by judih » January 19th, 2011, 11:20 pm

brilliant. love the effectiveness of the flow

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Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by weepingwillow » January 19th, 2011, 11:35 pm

I really enjoyed this....Thank you.

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Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by dadio » January 20th, 2011, 3:37 am

Thank you all for reading. :)

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Post by creativesoul » January 20th, 2011, 1:34 pm

yeah this is what im talking about! nice----!!!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Post by dadio » January 20th, 2011, 2:17 pm

Thank you, Creative Soul.

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