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In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 3:15 pm
by dadio
In and out your true love comes,
Bone idle with his words and gestures,
Floats over you with reluctant sighs,

His eyes glazed as foggy skies,
His lips wet as rainy days but closed,
Tight shut and wordless as the dead.

Out and in your lover goes,
The night blows its wind and cold,
Only the emptiness caresses you now.

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 3:29 pm
by dadio
Old poem revived.

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 11:20 pm
by judih
brilliant. love the effectiveness of the flow

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 19th, 2011, 11:35 pm
by weepingwillow
I really enjoyed this....Thank you.

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 1:42 am
by eugeneherman

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 3:37 am
by dadio
Thank you all for reading. :)

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 1:34 pm
by creativesoul
yeah this is what im talking about! nice----!!!

Re: In And Out Your True Love Comes.

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 2:17 pm
by dadio
Thank you, Creative Soul.