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don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 11:28 am
by joel
When Mother finds my stash and comprehends
it’s much much more than I would smoke alone,
I won’t be panicked – second-guess it – when
I lie to her, assuring her I’ve shared
it with my friends, because I love my ma
and trust I’ve known her worries well enough
to comprehend those shames she fears the most:
she’d rather bear a friendly dope-fiend host
to all the neighborhood than birth the rough
reality that – honest as the law –
her son’s been selling weed in gardens cared
for by the Joneses and the Smiths. But then
again, Ma, won’t it seem at odds a lonely
kid like me’d have had that many friends?

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 3:30 pm
by dadio
Fine poem, Joel.

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 9:25 pm
by WIREMAN
no one could steer me right bit mama tried.......she never did find my stash though.....

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 20th, 2011, 9:34 pm
by justwalt
I feel... dizzy

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 21st, 2011, 12:50 am
by Night Writer
What a beautiful write.

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 11:14 pm
by Hollweg
Lonely but not unbefriended. Well-attended but not too close.

Re: don't buy what he's selling

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 11:21 pm
by hester_prynne
Go on...tell her the truth!
Love this!
H 8)