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done 2

Post by creativesoul » January 21st, 2011, 1:10 am

honestly if i had never made some of the choices i made
maybe i could have forgiven the verbal abuse, the violience, the cheating
if you had a harliegh davidson and were some fun
if you liked sex as much as i did?

ill stick with the motorcylcle, sex toys
and total brillance
why was i done?
i just couldnt go thru losing everything one more time
i just walked with my sacreds
i felt free for awhile
not realizing how deep i had allowed you in
never again
i am done
the buffalo know
the broken sundancers come here
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: done 2

Post by dadio » January 21st, 2011, 8:43 am

Liked this poem and the biting theme. 8)

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Re: done 2

Post by saw » January 21st, 2011, 12:26 pm

the buffalo knows what evil lurks in the heart of man....sometimes when we tally it all up, it hits us.....I'm getting gypped !....................honest work.....
If you do not change your direction
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Re: done 2

Post by creativesoul » January 22nd, 2011, 3:00 am

irie heyo weya
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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