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done 2

Posted: January 21st, 2011, 1:10 am
by creativesoul
honestly if i had never made some of the choices i made
maybe i could have forgiven the verbal abuse, the violience, the cheating
if you had a harliegh davidson and were some fun
if you liked sex as much as i did?

ill stick with the motorcylcle, sex toys
and total brillance
why was i done?
i just couldnt go thru losing everything one more time
i just walked with my sacreds
i felt free for awhile
not realizing how deep i had allowed you in
never again
i am done
the buffalo know
the broken sundancers come here

Re: done 2

Posted: January 21st, 2011, 8:43 am
by dadio
Liked this poem and the biting theme. 8)

Re: done 2

Posted: January 21st, 2011, 12:26 pm
by saw
the buffalo knows what evil lurks in the heart of man....sometimes when we tally it all up, it hits us.....I'm getting gypped !....................honest work.....

Re: done 2

Posted: January 22nd, 2011, 3:00 am
by creativesoul
irie heyo weya