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another storm

Posted: January 24th, 2011, 1:14 pm
by joel
With skin in sedimental mystery—
as if it’s granulated even when
it’s smooth— with something slick my fingertips
experience in moments when I drag
them slowly over the horizons of
your body’s pose: relaxed, asleep, erotic—
heart aroused; the rest of me is numb
and who I am is not the I who’d come,
who stands in snows’ escapes with thoughts robotic
in their calculations and with love
moronic in imagination: crag
and dune and white and white and white— it slips
away from me: your ecstasy, your zen,
your grace that’s whiter than this snow would be.

Re: another storm

Posted: January 25th, 2011, 9:58 am
by dadio
There are a handful of poets who mean anything to me and you are one of them, Joel. Classic poem.

Re: another storm

Posted: January 25th, 2011, 10:02 am
by joel
Well, mutual admiration society. :)

Re: another storm

Posted: January 30th, 2011, 2:29 pm
by Sue Littleton
Delicately, beautifully erotic -- ♥♥♥