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player prayer

Posted: January 24th, 2011, 3:08 pm
by joel
I haven’t been afraid to say good-bye
and haven’t been ashamed to walk away
and, when I contemplate repentance, I
am bold to turn my thoughts and feet and jaywalk
cross the street to get to you – without
confirming that it’s safe – on hopes you’ll stay
exactly where I’ve left you— where I’d scout
you— where I’ll hope you’ll be and where I’ll pray
you’ll welcome me as if I’d been your friend
forever: that’s the way we siblings play
and that’s the flesh that bodies Let’s Pretend
as more— as our reality. Let’s say
I always go and come this way: are you
prepared to play like this forever too?

Re: player prayer

Posted: January 24th, 2011, 3:51 pm
by dadio
A poem with your fine style and trademark. 8)

Re: player prayer

Posted: January 25th, 2011, 12:22 am
by Doreen Peri
Your poetry gets better and better, Joel. You're master of cadence, meter, and heartfelt expression.

I loved this.

Re: player prayer

Posted: January 25th, 2011, 9:40 am
by joel
Dadio, Doreen--
your kind support has been
a kind support too few have seen.
I thank you, Dadio, Doreen.

Re: player prayer

Posted: January 30th, 2011, 2:27 pm
by Sue Littleton
There is something mystic about this poem that touches me deeply. To have a brother across the way, extending his hand, waiting ... without demands or complaints. Just there for you ... ♥♥