Saturnine

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weepingwillow
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Saturnine

Post by weepingwillow » January 26th, 2011, 5:24 pm

Found myself a
Depthless depression
Finding my arms
Physically clutching myself
Gasping for air
This gaping hole
In my stomach
Flooding the pool
Of blood my heart
Is drowning in
Sullen, decapitated
By your silent victor

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rshreve
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Re: Saturnine

Post by rshreve » January 26th, 2011, 6:03 pm

nice write

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Re: Saturnine

Post by creativesoul » January 27th, 2011, 4:00 pm

the planet of age is saturn they say
wisdom comes with age= so sadness and suffocation add to the joy of being able to breathe=
there is never a winner of any battle- just that feeling of not knowing how
to reach peaceful agreements
honor commitments=love unconditionally
each time i think i have got this
i fall

sweet descriptions
of a dark moment
or two....nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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