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Saturnine

Posted: January 26th, 2011, 5:24 pm
by weepingwillow
Found myself a
Depthless depression
Finding my arms
Physically clutching myself
Gasping for air
This gaping hole
In my stomach
Flooding the pool
Of blood my heart
Is drowning in
Sullen, decapitated
By your silent victor

Re: Saturnine

Posted: January 26th, 2011, 6:03 pm
by rshreve
nice write

Re: Saturnine

Posted: January 27th, 2011, 4:00 pm
by creativesoul
the planet of age is saturn they say
wisdom comes with age= so sadness and suffocation add to the joy of being able to breathe=
there is never a winner of any battle- just that feeling of not knowing how
to reach peaceful agreements
honor commitments=love unconditionally
each time i think i have got this
i fall

sweet descriptions
of a dark moment
or two....nice