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I found the gnomes (for my godson)

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 2:46 pm
by joel
I’ve noticed newly where the gnomes have slept:
they’ve crept away from play to hibernate
– through night, through day – and secretly they’ve kept
their winters warm, with dreams to navigate.
These gnomish cities’ citizens don’t snore—
and do they mumble in their slumbers? No!
They’re silent, still and easy to ignore
and soundless as a cavalcade of snow.
But when I slipped amidst their sleepy selves,
lined side by side like bookish shelves, I found
them far and wide: a colloquy of elves
tucked-in beneath a quilted snowstorm’s mound
with rooftop shingles for their mattress slats
and dangling heads in icicles for hats.
2011 Snow.jpg

Re: I found the gnomes (for my godson)

Posted: January 29th, 2011, 3:19 pm
by dadio
Excellent 8)

Re: I found the gnomes (for my godson)

Posted: February 3rd, 2011, 5:44 pm
by Sue Littleton
Dadio and I are your poetic elders and we are united in admiration. Sue♥♥♥ This has a gentle sweetness to it that delights me. ♥

Re: I found the gnomes (for my godson)

Posted: April 8th, 2011, 1:45 am
by snowman
sweet wonderful visions of ice capped gnomes
write on
dave

Re: I found the gnomes (for my godson)

Posted: April 16th, 2011, 9:11 am
by happytrails
I love this. I like the photo. Icicles are so beautiful and so is your poem.