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AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: January 30th, 2011, 9:10 pm
by Night Writer
I hate you for
Checking the fluids in my car
to make sure it was safe to drive

I hate you for
Turning the lights out
to lower the electricity

I hate you for
Making sure the door was locked before
bed to make sure we'd be unharmed

I hate you for
Setting the coffee the night before
so it was ready for me to go to work

I hate you for
Reading poetry to me in the graveyard
bringing dead poets to life

I hate you for
Touching me with such intensity
my skin burned like fire

Most of all
I HATE YOU FOR
making me
FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU

Then you walk away like I never existed!

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 12:18 am
by judih
i'm screaming in empathy
with the echoes of your voice

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 7:31 am
by saw
graphic emotion night writer.....thanx for sharing.......

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 8:26 pm
by Doreen Peri
Powerful!

Excruciating.

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 11:27 pm
by creativesoul
never can really get away from love
even when you walk away

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 2:23 pm
by Night Writer
Thank you....I feel as though I am stuck on one topic until I am able to completely get all these emotions out of me.

Re: AAAAHHHH!!!!

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 2:27 pm
by rshreve
very emotional write
great peice