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immortal

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 12:43 pm
by rshreve
to live forever
where death has no conception
imagination

Re: immortal

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 2:37 pm
by still.trucking
nothing so immortal to me today
as the spirit of poetry


A lot said in those 3 lines
all true

thank you

Re: immortal

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 3:03 pm
by Hollweg
Death sees through his mouth
Do not become distracted
By his painted eyes.

Re: immortal

Posted: January 31st, 2011, 3:43 pm
by rshreve
with eyes pitched in black
sweet nectar of crimson red
quenching the undead

Re: immortal

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 12:01 pm
by one of those jerks
red as Prego :oops:

it's all in there
the grotesque the sublime
the undead the unborn
immortal mundane
the spirit of poetry
being the music
I can't imagine

thank you all for the poetry

Re: immortal

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 2:06 pm
by Night Writer
His teeth sinking in
Throbbing pulse rate escalating
Change is beginning

Re: immortal

Posted: February 1st, 2011, 3:03 pm
by one of those jerks
The Banality of Evil
adorno auschwitz
Hiroshima Jonestown
Rwanda Joseph Conrad
Vampires bite
and tax imagination
changes are done
slouching towards Verdun
Poetry is all there is
to dwell in

“The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.”

Re: immortal

Posted: February 3rd, 2011, 9:26 am
by joel
think of a color
outside our lights' spectrum
no one's seen it yet

Re: immortal

Posted: February 3rd, 2011, 9:42 am
by saw
great haiku.....there is often more power in economy, as is true in this case