Ice cream cone

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rshreve
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Ice cream cone

Post by rshreve » February 1st, 2011, 2:43 pm

Sitting here alone
With just an ice cream cone

Sucking at the side
With nothing to hide

A kid at heart
And no impart

No one to adhere
Ice cream from ear to ear

Licking up and down
Without so much as a frown

Like a boy so boisterous
Oh that creamy goodness
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Night Writer
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Re: Ice cream cone

Post by Night Writer » February 1st, 2011, 3:57 pm

Brought such warm thoughts to such a freezing cold day. It is 5° in my area of the world.
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Re: Ice cream cone

Post by dadio » February 1st, 2011, 4:06 pm

remember those days. well put. 8)
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mudshark
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Re: Ice cream cone

Post by mudshark » February 1st, 2011, 4:22 pm

stumblin rythm and a bit forced.
still I really.. liked it.
hell of a ride.
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Re: Ice cream cone

Post by joel » February 3rd, 2011, 9:23 am

Eros' early valentine's cupid....
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