Misery Unfolds

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no1special

Misery Unfolds

Post by no1special » February 1st, 2011, 10:22 pm

The story of us
has already been told
even centuries old

Romeo and Juliet
we are not

lovers
neither of us
require
desire
anything more palatial
than one another

you
my every breath
without you
I can bare
nothing more than death

I call your bluff
simply had enough

on this day
your stubborn silence
seals our fate

for us
it's too late
I will never know
your silence
is nothing more
than
your selfish games
that I hate

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Re: Misery Unfolds

Post by creativesoul » February 1st, 2011, 10:23 pm

i dunno- angry is after hurt-stay with it---
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Misery Unfolds

Post by neologistic » February 1st, 2011, 10:58 pm

i like this poem but i'm real confused about it. have to reread it

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