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A Wish
Posted: February 6th, 2011, 12:25 pm
by Night Writer
Lie to me please
Pretend you love me
As you did before
Pretend all you said
Was true
Act as if you cared once
Wrap me in your arms
Set my body on fire
From your desire
Just give me one day
just one
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 11th, 2011, 2:22 pm
by creativesoul
i like this one- it has warmth and opening, and a sweet humility- naturally it appeals to those of us that have been bumped, dumped or fired....peace
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 11th, 2011, 3:42 pm
by dadio
Think I have felt this once time in my distant past. You have captured it well.

Re: A Wish
Posted: February 11th, 2011, 10:09 pm
by creativesoul
i grant you your wish
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 11th, 2011, 11:55 pm
by Night Writer
Very cute thank you (:
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 12th, 2011, 2:20 pm
by creativesoul
so did you feel
everything you needed to feel?
like the tide
ebb and flow
have to grow
even when you know
it will change everything you love
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 13th, 2011, 4:07 pm
by Night Writer
Sorry the pup didn't bring
The warming love i need
When confronted with my wish
I found myself over taken
By emotions
Uncontrollable emotions
That i couldn't find
My voice
Re: A Wish
Posted: February 13th, 2011, 6:44 pm
by creativesoul
puppy love
is so much easier than grown up love
why people want to control emotions, belches, farts..
is kind of the problem
letting go of old ideas
every day
the ones that held us up
for inspection or admiration
all washed away
we all sneeze
yet it just is not so pretty sometimes
real love is larger than need or passion
it grows with you
around you
no matter who is there
or not
the jewel
is how to keep
the dreams alive
thrive
as an evolved soul
growing, knowing
it will change again