Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

words remained remarkably stable
meanings fell apart
more time brought nothing but
hucksters, opportunists, charlatans

socratic methods did not shine a beacon
into the tunnel of love, rather
common english read like sewer pipe sanskrit
scribbled in the margins of our breath

Deep poem; enjoyed.

I'm too distracted to pull out its meaning(s)...but I'm loving its sounds, syllables...and I'll enjoy coming back to it.

well done, however it made me wanna brush my teeth

words remained remarkably stable ... first image a sort of vital signs pumping on a screen, I like how the poem continues, gracias for share it!!!!

yup