Who Came For Me Last Night

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Michael
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Who Came For Me Last Night

Post by Michael » February 11th, 2011, 12:14 am

The following song is now #89 on my personal chart is called “Who Came For Me Last Night”.

The inspiration for this song escapes me, as it did when I wrote it earlier in my life.

I wanted to write a song that bordered on being a concerto for piano but stayed far enough from actually realizing that fact to keep me from having to be responsible for it. I think that I accomplished that and more (or less).

There are two “movements”, so to speak, the verses and the refrain. Add to that ambiguous and obscure rock lyrics and, bada-bing, bada-boom, I ain’t in the same universe as classical music. But, whew, was that ever close!


To friendship,
Michael

“And what if you track down these men and kill them? What if you murdered all of us? From every corner of your Republic, thousands would rise to take our places. Even Nazis can't kill that fast.” – Victor Laszlow (played by Paul Henreid), from “Casablanca” - (1942)


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Who Came For Me Last Night[/b]

Someone has got to know who,
someone that I can talk to,
someone has got to know who
came for me last night.

Someone has got to have seen,
someone who knows what I mean,
someone has got to have seen
who came for me last night.

Was her hair golden yellow?
Did she wear a look of love?
When she spoke, was it mellow?

Someone has got to have heard
if there was spoken a word.
Someone has got to have heard
who came for me last night.

Was her hair golden yellow?
Did she wear a look of love?
When she spoke, was it mellow?

Someone has got to have heard
if there was spoken a word.
Someone has got to have heard
who came for me last night.

Someone has got to know who,
someone that I can talk to,
someone has got to know who
came for me last night.
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Re: Who Came For Me Last Night

Post by judih » February 11th, 2011, 1:02 am

i suggest that the inspiration came from me, cause in April 2005, I wrote

Who's Coming to me, Tonight?

Who is coming to me tonight
to rock my roll
to lick my c l i t to
fill my holes
to warm my heat
to merge in holy
Orgasm?

Who is coming to rock my roll
to breathe my nipples
in sweet sensation
in skin to skin
is it her or him
Who is coming
this lovely night
to melt my warm
to rub my storm
to share this holy orgasm?

Who is coming this fragrant night
to lick my c l i t
to find my spots
to share the dance
of yoni trance

Who is commming
to tingle
in bliss
to enter this
to merge
to
share
to be
in holy freedom fields
Who
is here tonight
in auras
new
in magic brew
in rock and roll
smooth oiled views
the breasts of giving
the shapes uplifting
the me and you
but who


_________________ Michael, do you think? _____________ if not, then who/what?

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Re: Who Came For Me Last Night

Post by judih » February 11th, 2011, 1:09 am

Michael wrote:The following song is now #89 on my personal chart is called “Who Came For Me Last Night”.

The inspiration for this song escapes me, as it did when I wrote it earlier in my life.

I wanted to write a song that bordered on being a concerto for piano but stayed far enough from actually realizing that fact to keep me from having to be responsible for it. I think that I accomplished that and more (or less).

There are two “movements”, so to speak, the verses and the refrain. Add to that ambiguous and obscure rock lyrics and, bada-bing, bada-boom, I ain’t in the same universe as classical music. But, whew, was that ever close!


To friendship,
Michael

“And what if you track down these men and kill them? What if you murdered all of us? From every corner of your Republic, thousands would rise to take our places. Even Nazis can't kill that fast.” – Victor Laszlow (played by Paul Henreid), from “Casablanca” - (1942)


World Conditions and Action Items


Who Came For Me Last Night[/b]

Someone has got to know who,
someone that I can talk to,
someone has got to know who
came for me last night.

Someone has got to have seen,
someone who knows what I mean,
someone has got to have seen
who came for me last night.

Was her hair golden yellow?
Did she wear a look of love?
When she spoke, was it mellow?

Someone has got to have heard
if there was spoken a word.
Someone has got to have heard
who came for me last night.

Was her hair golden yellow?
Did she wear a look of love?
When she spoke, was it mellow?

Someone has got to have heard
if there was spoken a word.
Someone has got to have heard
who came for me last night.

Someone has got to know who,
someone that I can talk to,
someone has got to know who
came for me last night.
like this very much, wistful voice...wish i could give you a name

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