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inventory day
Posted: February 13th, 2011, 4:26 pm
by Lao C Ryter
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Re: inventory day
Posted: February 13th, 2011, 4:38 pm
by dadio
Fine poem.
Re: inventory day
Posted: February 13th, 2011, 5:47 pm
by Night Writer
Inventory needs to be
Checked and checked again
Open the cupboard
You'll discover
A jar
One with at least
Two hearts
Two i can show you
One a girl
So young and sweet
The other
A woman
That is me
Nice write Lao, sometimes we need to see ourselves through someones eyes.
Re: inventory day
Posted: February 14th, 2011, 11:53 am
by saw
wry and succinct.......nice work