blind date

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saw
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blind date

Post by saw » February 15th, 2011, 11:56 am

Hi, are you Carol ?
Hi, nice to meet you
please sit down, coffee ?
the service is a little slow
you know it's funny, Cathy
Carol, my name is Carol
of course it is, well anyway
you may think the universe is stable
Carol, but in fact we are a seething
maelstrom of subatomic particles
fleetingly popping in and out
of existence, the measurement
of their physical properties
uncertain at best, meaning Cathy
that we cannot know both
the energy and the lifetime
of a particle, which tells us right off
that a subatomic event occurring
within a tiny time frame involves
an uncertain amount of energy, right
so obviously Carla when Albert
theorized E=mc2 that meant that all
elementary particles interact with each other,
quantum particles which appear
out of nowhere demonstrating
this subatomic tango, however brief
when added across the universe
gives rise to enormous energy
more than is contained in all the matter
in the world, did you ever wonder
about destiny, Connie, whether gravity
and magnetism could be linked.

No, Norman, I really don't give a shit
I'm leaving now, this just isn't going to work out
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Night Writer
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Re: blind date

Post by Night Writer » February 15th, 2011, 1:28 pm

Nicely done saw. The depiction of a conversation between two unknown individuals and one being so self absorbed i laughed out loud when reading this piece. Been there done that checked it off my list (:

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Re: blind date

Post by emel.scott » February 16th, 2011, 3:36 pm

I'd go out with him. :P
We should not mind if on our ear there fell. Some less of cunning, more of oracle...Thoreau

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