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from a mime to a mute
Posted: February 16th, 2011, 1:02 pm
by emel.scott
put words together sweetly
and in an interesting way
or come at the world obliquely
go stealthy, cheeky, meekly
trash the language expleatly
hey, cover the landscape completely
but please please please, I beg thee
try to have something to say
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 16th, 2011, 3:39 pm
by Lao C Ryter
!VIVA LA SUBSTANCIA!
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 16th, 2011, 4:31 pm
by Doreen Peri
emel.scott wrote:put words together sweetly
and in an interesting way
or come at the world obliquely
go stealthy, cheeky, meekly
trash the language expleatly
hey, cover the landscape completely
but please please please, I beg thee
try to have something to say
but please please please, I beg thee
try to have something to say
Oh yeah! ... YOu said it!
Sometimes I have nothing to say but I keep on talking anyway and writing anyway and it just goes on and on and on and on and on!
LOL
Thanks for the reminder, Scott
I always like your pieces. You've got a great way with rhythm, the sounds of the words, and i especially like the witty ones. (Like this)
I donno why but this reminded me of Dorothy Parker (one of my idols). The last two lines anyway....
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 7:13 pm
by joel
When new to his hearing dis-ease
the gentleman fell to his knees
as the new friends he made
spoke with hand-jives displayed,
while screamed at them: SIGN! LOUD! ER! PLEASE!
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 18th, 2011, 3:23 am
by emel.scott
it can be deafening can't it
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 18th, 2011, 1:08 pm
by Arcadia
but please please please, I beg thee
try to have something to say
ok, I´ll re-read the hear sutra, I promise!!!
Re: from a mute to a mime
Posted: February 18th, 2011, 1:53 pm
by emel.scott
take care not to get an infection of wisdom
