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Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 4:00 pm
by rite
Innocence molested
Purity raped
Eyes wet
Seeping pain
Years passed
Seek comfort
Between sheets
Hold tight
That pillow
Bright light
Wont seek
Me yet
Not enough
Eternal suffering
Re: Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 4:34 pm
by ToXic aPplE
All I can say is WOW
Re: Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 4:38 pm
by Doreen Peri
sounds painful
welcome to the Studio ...
or welcome back? your writing sounds very familiar.
Have you been a member here before using another screen name?
Just curious
Re: Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 5:37 pm
by rite
Once upon a time in a land far far away,
I may have travelled by and stopped to say hello.
A note or two here and there.
You may have seen a scribe such as I.
Travelling through several sites,
To build my voice song by song.
Re: Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 6:48 pm
by joel
life is often rite and wrong
written short and written long
both are lovely, both are strong
when their inktrails race along
in these streams of righteous song
Re: Scars
Posted: February 17th, 2011, 8:55 pm
by rite
Thanks everyone.
P.S. this is not my pain.
Re: Scars
Posted: February 18th, 2011, 5:16 am
by creativesoul
i like it healing there- hope=-,,,,,<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>
peace
Re: Scars
Posted: February 18th, 2011, 12:55 pm
by Arcadia
eternal suffering sounds too much, anyway...!
hola again!