I wonder

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rite
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I wonder

Post by rite » February 19th, 2011, 3:54 am

Moonlight shines through the window
Outlining the curves of her body
Sheet gently caresses her skin
I wonder does she feel me
Watch her sleep or
Run my fingers through her hair
She moaned when i whispered
Do you think she heard me
Tell her I love her
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dadio
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Re: I wonder

Post by dadio » February 19th, 2011, 4:18 pm

yes, very good poem. :)
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Re: I wonder

Post by rshreve » February 19th, 2011, 5:24 pm

very nice
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